I watched TED about (Adora Stivak). She did an amazing presentation about what she thinks about children. She said children learn most of things from adults, and children have a open mind. I agree with what she presented. I think if their parents are good adults, their child will be a good person. Like this, many children learns from their parents. I think parents have to listen and talk with their child.
One of the sentence that remind me in her presentation was 'you must lend an ear today because we are the leaders of tomorrow'. It remind me because I want to say this sentence to many adults.
One of the sentence that remind me in her presentation was 'you must lend an ear today because we are the leaders of tomorrow'. It remind me because I want to say this sentence to many adults.
I was very surprised about 'Adora Svitak.' When she was 6years old, she got a notebook and she strarted writting many storise. The first book that she completed was 'flying finger'. I didn't read this book, but I want to read it later. It was a good time listening to her presentation.
Your writing is very clear. You haven't really made any spelling or grammar mistakes (expect "learns" -> "learn").
ReplyDeleteYou wrote that you want to say, "You must lend an ear today because we are the leaders of tomorrow," to many adults, but you haven't written about why you want to do this or what you think this means. These are interesting things that I would like you to explain.